Feedback

When I showed my mentor Lee this version I received alot of feedback. The film itself wasnt put together badly, it was just structured wrong. I only included a little bit of the actually Student Life and put it too much other stuff. I also made some scenes a bit tacky by putting type onto buildings. I then used music that I had not got permission to. I took this feedback and went back to the drawing board but this is good development I feel as it points me in the right direction.